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Erik Remsen commented on the post, I am here because 8 years, 1 month ago
Dear Hussein,
It was great to meet you at the kick-off day and I love that you are in What’s the Story in order to get out of your comfort zone. In my experience, students who have thrived in this program are […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, Growth to be made along the way. 8 years, 1 month ago
Sasha,
It was nice to meet you at the Kickoff Day last week. It sounds like you are in WtS for the right reasons. You are here to work with others who want to work towards a shared goal, and other students are […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #5 Finding Inspiration 9 years ago
T.D.,
I’m pleased to see you broadened your research and looked at what other tribes around the world have done to innovate. It’s important to have a broader context when trying to fully understand localized […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #4 Cartography 9 years, 1 month ago
Phaedra,
There is a lot in this mind map; probably too much to fully address in one year of What’s the Story. However, I also see several doable action steps within the map from improving (creating?) queer […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #4 Mind Map 9 years, 1 month ago
T.D.,
I like this mind map because I can see several possible action steps emerging from this work. One would be focused on incorporating the Abenaki in Vermont curricula and the other would be focused on […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #3: Going Into Depth 9 years, 1 month ago
This is really interesting post. I am not too familiar with the Abenaki so I am learning from your posts. I did, however, recently attend a conference where I heard an Abenaki woman speak about a little about her […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #3 What's The Story? 9 years, 1 month ago
Phaedra,
This is a really thoughtful post that does a good job digging into the issue. In terms of locating resources about Vermont, I wonder if you have looked through the data collected by the YRBS survey? […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #2 Shifting Ideas 9 years, 1 month ago
Phaedra,
This was a really interesting post to read. It seems like the speaker who visited your school last week has really changed your thinking. The fact that a noticeable chunk of the CVU population had […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #2: Topic Interviews 9 years, 1 month ago
It sounds like your parents gave you a wealth of issues to choose from. After reading your post, I find myself wondering what you think of the topics they suggested. Do you find them all interesting, or do only […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, I am the one who… 9 years, 1 month ago
Welcome to WtS.
It’s an interesting blog post and I love the wonder you have about “who gets to decide how the world works, and why it can’t be us.” These are the questions we want all students asking.
On a […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #1 Lesbionage 9 years, 1 month ago
Phaedra,
Though the post it short, it is very powerful. I’ll be curious to see what you decide to settle on as a social issue to pursue in this course.
By the way, this post needs a ‘featured image.’ The […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #1: What am I doing? 9 years, 1 month ago
Avery,
Welcome to WtS.
I love the questions you pose: “What does a highschooler have to do to change peoples minds? What am I capable of doing?” These are questions we want all students to wrestle with, not […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #1 The One 9 years, 1 month ago
Aidan,
I really like the featured image you chose. Is a picture of yours or one you found online?
I also like the positivity in this first post and I hope you hold on to that throughout this course and […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #8: Putting Together the Pieces 10 years ago
Greta,
I heard this commentary on VPR tonight and wanted to share it with you: http://digital.vpr.net/post/schubart-consensus
I was reminded of your project on the pipeline as I listened to him explain what […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #7: Part of the Solution (Part 2) 10 years ago
Greta,
If you incorporate some of the information that both Shel and I shared with you, that should make the sections on public opinion and the Vermont Gas perspective more detailed and equivalent to what you […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #7 – What Can Happen in 120 Seconds 10 years ago
Anna,
I think as you refine your pitch, I’d like to see you continue to work on better connecting the larger issue of sexual assault to the dress code. The pitch starts with a macro look of sexual assault but […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #7: Part of the Solution (Part 2) 10 years ago
Greta,
First, having read your previous blog posts, I’m already kind of hooked on this topic. It’s such an interesting local case study on how complicated and messy it can be to try and balance environmental […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #6 Refugee Mind Map 10 years ago
Nigel,
I enjoyed looking through your mind map. It showed me you’ve done some deep thinking and, given the specific names and events mentioned, you’ve done some in-depth research, too.
As you continue, I […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, #6: Mind-Mapping the Pipeline 10 years ago
Greta,
First, let me say that although it makes it more complicated to work through, I love that you drew dotted lines to show connections between things grouped in different categories. It shows a deep level […]
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Erik Remsen commented on the post, # 6 – Dress Code Mind Map 10 years ago
Anna,
Your mind map shows me a couple of things. First, you’ve done a lot of deep thinking about the issue and, second, as the map clearly shows, dress code is a complex issue. For example, the ‘importance’ […]
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