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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Mind mapping</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 26 Oct 2018 13:54:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lucy,</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not one of your normal blog readers, but I&#8217;ve seen that you&#8217;ve been digging into racism in your blog posts and I wanted to share with you this story from Vermont Public Radio: [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, blog post #6</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 26 Oct 2018 13:51:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Minelle,</p>
<p>I came across this story from Vermont Public Radio yesterday and I wanted to share it with you since it focuses on perceptions of racism in Vermont. </p>
<p>Erik</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Blog Post #5</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 26 Oct 2018 13:48:56 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hussein,</p>
<p>I&#8217;m back because I wanted to share this story from Vermont Public Radio with you: <a href="http://digital.vpr.net/post/do-you-think-racism-problem-vermont-today-poll-looks-states-perception#stream/0" rel="nofollow ugc">http://digital.vpr.net/post/do-you-think-racism-problem-vermont-today-poll-looks-states-perception#stream/0</a></p>
<p>Erik</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Blog Post #5</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 25 Oct 2018 15:26:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hussein,</p>
<p>It looks as though you chose to further explore two aspects of your original mind map: white supremacy and the YWCA. Since there is no description to accompany the mind map, I&#8217;m curious why pick these [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #5 Diving</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 23 Oct 2018 15:17:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sasha,</p>
<p>This is another amazing mind map! I really appreciate that you had a solid focus on the action piece in this map. That has been one of my recurring questions for you throughout this process and you [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #5 Mind Mapping</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 23 Oct 2018 15:06:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Adelle,</p>
<p>Thanks for sharing your mind map. Looking at it, it seems to me that the implementation of proficiency-based grading at your school has been rough. Is that a safe assumption? I also wondered how much [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Blog #5</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 18 Oct 2018 18:22:19 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Minelle,</p>
<p>Awesome job getting this done well before the deadline. I&#8217;ve been reflecting on all the writing and thinking you&#8217;ve done so far as I think about what to write. It seems to me that you are determined to [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Post #4 Mind Map</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 16 Oct 2018 17:12:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Minelle,</p>
<p>Thanks for sharing your mind map. I think it reflects your desire to dig deep into this issue and try to gain a full understanding of it. </p>
<p>Two aspects of your map got me thinking. The first was the [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #4 What are we going to do? (Alzheimer&#039;s Mind Map)</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 15 Oct 2018 15:04:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sasha,</p>
<p>Thanks for fixing the link. It worked for me and your mind map is pretty amazing. I was also not familiar with Coggle and it seems like a tool that is really well suited for mind mapping. Thanks for [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Blog #4 Racism Mind Poster</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 15 Oct 2018 14:32:12 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hussein,</p>
<p>I like that you included some images on your mind map. You&#8217;ve managed to meet the deadlines each week by not only completing the task but also finding time to include creative and personal touches, [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #4 Proficiencies and What They Mean</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 15 Oct 2018 00:10:04 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Adelle,</p>
<p>Wow, this is quite a change of direction. However, I&#8217;m really impressed by your self-reflection about what is important to you, as well as your courage to make a sharp turn in the middle of this [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #3 Conversations &#038; Wondering</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 09 Oct 2018 18:33:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Adelle,</p>
<p>I want to applaud you for seeking out differing perspectives while conducting these conversations. I&#8217;m impressed that you actively sought out someone whose opinion differs from yours. </p>
<p>Your [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #3 Making a dent</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Oct 2018 15:39:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sasha,</p>
<p>Great work with the interviews. Even though they were all family members, you got three unique perspectives on the issue. </p>
<p>Having read your detailed summary of the interviews I have some questions. [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Blog #3 Racism Interview</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Oct 2018 14:17:31 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hussein,</p>
<p>Great work with your interviews. I like that you sought out a new perspective by reaching out to a friend in Tennessee. To fully understand a topic requires looking at it from multiple and varied [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #2 The Confederate Flag and Modern-Day Implications</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Oct 2018 16:40:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Adelle,</p>
<p>Thanks for sharing this thoughtful post. It&#8217;s really interesting to hear about your experiences as well as those of the artists. I also think you came up with some great questions, especially the first [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #2 evanesce</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2018 23:36:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sasha,</p>
<p>I love the symbolism in both the title and image you chose for this post. They are both really thoughtful choices.</p>
<p>I am also impressed by the depth of your knowledge on this topic. You&#8217;ve clearly done [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Blog 2</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 01 Oct 2018 15:58:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Minelle,</p>
<p>First, I really like the quote that you chose for your featured image. To me, it seems like a statement of your strength. </p>
<p>Second, I&#8217;ve observed that both your blog posts have referenced your [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Blog Post #2 Racism</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 01 Oct 2018 15:32:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hussein,</p>
<p>Thanks for your thoughtful post about racism. Your writing has captured the fact that racism is present in so many different aspects of our lives. You mention television, politics, and sports among [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Why I Am Here</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 24 Sep 2018 16:01:29 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Adelle,</p>
<p>I love the passion around taking action and making a difference that I can sense in your writing. You&#8217;ve signed up for the right course; this year you&#8217;ll be able to take your passion and energy and [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Why I’m here</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 24 Sep 2018 15:45:30 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Minelle,</p>
<p>It was great to meet you at the kick-off day. Although this course will challenge you, at the end of the year I think you&#8217;ll find that you will have made an impact that extends beyond your [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, I am here because</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 24 Sep 2018 15:22:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Hussein,</p>
<p>It was great to meet you at the kick-off day and I love that you are in What&#8217;s the Story in order to get out of your comfort zone. In my experience, students who have thrived in this program are [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, Growth to be made along the way.</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 19 Sep 2018 13:13:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sasha,</p>
<p>It was nice to meet you at the Kickoff Day last week. It sounds like you are in WtS for the right reasons. You are here to work with others who want to work towards a shared goal, and other students are [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #5 Finding Inspiration</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 20 Oct 2017 23:11:14 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>T.D.,</p>
<p>I&#8217;m pleased to see you broadened your research and looked at what other tribes around the world have done to innovate. It&#8217;s important to have a broader context when trying to fully understand localized [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #4 Cartography</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 11 Oct 2017 00:31:16 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Phaedra,</p>
<p>There is a lot in this mind map; probably too much to fully address in one year of What&#8217;s the Story. However, I also see several doable action steps within the map from improving (creating?) queer [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #4 Mind Map</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 11 Oct 2017 00:23:33 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>T.D.,</p>
<p>I like this mind map because I can see several possible action steps emerging from this work. One would be focused on incorporating the Abenaki in Vermont curricula and the other would be focused on [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #3: Going Into Depth</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 07 Oct 2017 14:30:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is really interesting post. I am not too familiar with the Abenaki so I am learning from your posts. I did, however, recently attend a conference where I heard an Abenaki woman speak about  a little about her [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #3 What&#039;s The Story?</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 07 Oct 2017 14:21:16 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Phaedra,</p>
<p>This is a really thoughtful post that does a good job digging into the issue. In terms of locating resources about Vermont, I wonder if you have looked through the data collected by the YRBS survey? [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #2 Shifting Ideas</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 28 Sep 2017 15:49:53 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Phaedra,</p>
<p>This was a really interesting post to read. It seems like the speaker who visited your school last week has really changed your thinking. The fact that a noticeable chunk of the CVU population had [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #2: Topic Interviews</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 28 Sep 2017 15:11:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It sounds like your parents gave you a wealth of issues to choose from. After reading your post, I find myself wondering what you think of the topics they suggested. Do you find them all interesting, or do only [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, I am the one who...</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Sep 2017 18:22:05 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Welcome to WtS.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s an interesting blog post and I love the wonder you have about &#8220;who gets to decide how the world works, and why it can’t be us.&#8221; These are the questions we want all students asking. </p>
<p>On a [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #1 Lesbionage</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Sep 2017 18:11:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Phaedra,</p>
<p>Though the post it short, it is very powerful. I&#8217;ll be curious to see what you decide to settle on as a social issue to pursue in this course. </p>
<p>By the way, this post needs a &#8216;featured image.&#8217; The [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #1: What am I doing?</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Sep 2017 17:54:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Avery,</p>
<p>Welcome to WtS. </p>
<p>I love the questions you pose: &#8220;What does a highschooler have to do to change peoples minds? What am I capable of doing?&#8221; These are questions we want all students to wrestle with, not [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #1 The One</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Sep 2017 17:46:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Aidan,</p>
<p>I really like the featured image you chose. Is a picture of yours or one you found online? </p>
<p>I also like the positivity in this first post and I hope you hold on to that throughout this course and [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #8: Putting Together the Pieces</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 01 Nov 2016 23:38:35 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greta,</p>
<p>I heard this commentary on VPR tonight and wanted to share it with you: <a href="http://digital.vpr.net/post/schubart-consensus" rel="nofollow ugc">http://digital.vpr.net/post/schubart-consensus</a></p>
<p>I was reminded of your project on the pipeline as I listened to him explain what [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #7: Part of the Solution (Part 2)</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 30 Oct 2016 23:12:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greta, </p>
<p>If you incorporate some of the information that both Shel and I shared with you, that should make the sections on public opinion and the Vermont Gas perspective more detailed and equivalent to what you [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #7 - What Can Happen in 120 Seconds</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/7-what-can-happen-in-120-seconds/#comment-569</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 26 Oct 2016 18:17:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Anna,</p>
<p>I think as you refine your pitch, I&#8217;d like to see you continue to work on better connecting the larger issue of sexual assault to the dress code. The pitch starts with a macro look of sexual assault but [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #7: Part of the Solution (Part 2)</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/7-part-of-the-solution-part-2/#comment-567</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 26 Oct 2016 18:00:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greta,</p>
<p>First, having read your previous blog posts, I&#8217;m already kind of hooked on this topic. It&#8217;s such an interesting local case study on how complicated and messy it can be to try and balance environmental [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #6 Refugee Mind Map</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/6-refugee-mind-map/#comment-452</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Oct 2016 15:17:13 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nigel,</p>
<p>I enjoyed looking through your mind map. It showed me you&#8217;ve done some deep thinking and, given the specific names and events mentioned, you&#8217;ve done some in-depth research, too.</p>
<p>As you continue, I [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #6: Mind-Mapping the Pipeline</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/6-mind-mapping-the-pipeline/#comment-451</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Oct 2016 15:08:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greta,</p>
<p>First, let me say that although it makes it more complicated to work through, I love that you drew dotted lines to show connections between things grouped in different categories. It shows a deep level [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, # 6 - Dress Code Mind Map</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/6-dress-code-mind-map/#comment-450</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Oct 2016 14:50:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Anna,</p>
<p>Your mind map shows me a couple of things. First, you&#8217;ve done a lot of deep thinking about the issue and, second, as the map clearly shows, dress code is a complex issue. For example, the &#8216;importance&#8217; [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #5: Both Sides of the Pipeline</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/5-both-sides-of-the-pipeline/#comment-341</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 12 Oct 2016 18:23:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greta,</p>
<p>I really like the questions you generated at the end of the second paragraph. I know we had talked about short term and long term effects on Saturday, but the other ones are fascinating to consider also. [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #5: We Can&#039;t Ignore The Violence</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/5-we-cant-ignore-the-violence/#comment-340</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 12 Oct 2016 17:47:17 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Anna,</p>
<p>I really like how you have begun to connect your issue of interest (dress codes in schools) to some larger issues that the country is dealing with (eating disorders, sexism, rape culture, etc.). It makes [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #4 Reflection on Ted Talk and Refugee Resettlement Pitch</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/4-reflection-on-ted-talk-and-refugee-resettlement-pitch/#comment-272</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2016 13:56:31 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Nigel,</p>
<p>My name is Erik Remsen and I am one of the mentors in this program. I read your post since it focuses on refugee resettlement, an issue that I have some interest in as well. I am also a former teacher [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #4: If You Believe What I Believe</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/4-if-you-believe-what-i-believe/#comment-266</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2016 01:02:37 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greta,</p>
<p>I&#8217;m sharing this link to the Muslim Girls Making Change website with you: <a href="http://muslimgirlsmakingchange.weebly.com/" rel="nofollow ugc">http://muslimgirlsmakingchange.weebly.com/</a> Take some time to look through it.</p>
<p>So now, you&#8217;re surely asking, &#8220;how is this [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #4 - Why We&#039;re Ashamed of Our Bodies</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/4-why-were-ashamed-of-our-bodies/#comment-240</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 03 Oct 2016 20:19:45 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Anna,</p>
<p>Thought this might interest you: It&#8217;s an article from the student newspaper at BHS about a dress code incident that happened there recently: <a href="http://bhsregister.com/dress-code-incident-raises-concern/" rel="nofollow ugc">http://bhsregister.com/dress-code-incident-raises-concern/</a> [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #3: Part of the Solution</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/3-part-of-the-solution/#comment-185</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 29 Sep 2016 00:27:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greta, </p>
<p>You may have already come across this source (<a href="http://vtclimate.org/" rel="nofollow ugc">http://vtclimate.org/</a>) but if not, it could be useful because it focuses specifically on climate change in Vermont. </p>
<p>Previously, you had expressed an [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #3 If You Choose Silence, You&#039;re Choosing the Side of the Oppressor</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/3-if-you-choose-silence-youre-choosing-the-side-of-the-oppressor/#comment-183</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Sep 2016 23:41:21 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Anna,</p>
<p>Thank you for taking the time to write in-depth about each of your topics of interest. After reading through your post, I am wondering if you are more interested in looking at one of these issues inside [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #2: Do I have an idea?</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/do-i-have-an-idea/#comment-42</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 21 Sep 2016 14:22:27 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greta,</p>
<p>Reading this post, I wonder about the possibility of looking at the intersection of music and writing and one of the other topics that interest you. For example, how do the arts (music, writing, etc.) [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #1: Something About Everything</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/something-about-everything/#comment-41</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 21 Sep 2016 14:15:19 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greta,</p>
<p>My name is Erik Remsen and I am one of the mentor teachers this year. I loved seeing your observation that &#8220;the world is everything at once,&#8221; and not split into individual silos, such as those like [&hellip;]</p>
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				<title>Erik Remsen commented on the post, #2: Issues of Social Inequality</title>
				<link>http://whatsthestoryvt.com/issues-of-social-inequality/#comment-26</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 20 Sep 2016 00:59:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Anna,</p>
<p>My name is Erik Remsen and I am one of the mentor teachers in this program. I&#8217;m excited to see that you have several ideas for possible research topics. They all have great potential and you&#8217;re right, [&hellip;]</p>
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